count theses seconds until the hour

By agentlemenspromise

Another set of five ran down his back
But I never thought they’d be yours
Your mouth is yours behind closed doors
And your hands can roam wherever they please
It’s a letter i've been perfecting
Every letter in sucker
Every syllable in slut
To my best friend: your not getting your moneys worth from what you’re catching your death from
Relationships are too inconsistent
But tears from her wrist are all too common

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Copyright 2004 agentelmenspromise
Published on Wednesday, October 27, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • BleedSilver On Thursday, November 11, 2004, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    Man...another devastator..."tears from her wrist are all too common" That killed me man...You struck one of my few soft spots...

  • Derelict Dream On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, Derelict Dream (38)By person wrote:

    Complex, yet subtle. Nicely done

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