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Dimensions (Haika)
By Derelict Dream
Vast Emptiness Now,
Nothing Exists, Nor Does Time;
Paradox Must End...
A Long Endless Line
Stretching Forever, Now Folds;
From First, To Second!
A Plane, Horizons,
Begin To Curl, Creating--
The Third Dimension!
Space, Which Has No Warmth,
Can't Exist... Without Some Time;
The Fourth, Now It Lives!
Space Twists On Itself,
Further Causing Change, And Now--
It Shatters, Big Bang!
Now Warmth And Substance;
How Will It All Coexist?
Something's Still Missing.
Attraction! That's it;
Quarks, Muons, Leptons, Protons...
Particles Form; Mix.
Nebulae, Stars Form--
Galaxies Transcend, To What?
To What Else? An Atom.
Universally,
We're all in this together;
Embrace Your Own Dream.
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Copyright 2004 Derelict Dream (David O. Wilkins)
Published on Tuesday, October 26, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Dimensions (Haika)"
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A former member wrote:
Wow holy crap. To create one haiku and yet an entire piece wrapped around this formula. This was incredible. Very VERY well done. ~Ship!
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, manywalks
(750)
wrote:
I'm jealous. I can't do haiku and make it make sense. Excellent. ~ mw
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
*claps hands* yes, very well done. As you can tell I love haiku :)
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On Tuesday, October 26, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
This form of poetry with structure makes writing (and reading) so much more interesting. Existenial questioning in its may be coolest form.. -S
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On Saturday, November 6, 2004, Derelict Dream
(38) wrote:
Thanks for commenting on this one, It seems to be my least liked work so far, but I will learn from it.....
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