Dimensions (Haika)

By Derelict Dream

Vast Emptiness Now,
Nothing Exists, Nor Does Time;
Paradox Must End...

A Long Endless Line
Stretching Forever, Now Folds;
From First, To Second!

A Plane, Horizons,
Begin To Curl, Creating--
The Third Dimension!

Space, Which Has No Warmth,
Can't Exist... Without Some Time;
The Fourth, Now It Lives!

Space Twists On Itself,
Further Causing Change, And Now--
It Shatters, Big Bang!

Now Warmth And Substance;
How Will It All Coexist?
Something's Still Missing.

Attraction! That's it;
Quarks, Muons, Leptons, Protons...
Particles Form; Mix.

Nebulae, Stars Form--
Galaxies Transcend, To What?
To What Else? An Atom.



Universally,
We're all in this together;
Embrace Your Own Dream.

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Copyright 2004 Derelict Dream (David O. Wilkins)
Published on Tuesday, October 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wow holy crap. To create one haiku and yet an entire piece wrapped around this formula. This was incredible. Very VERY well done. ~Ship!

  • manywalks On Saturday, November 6, 2004, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    I'm jealous. I can't do haiku and make it make sense. Excellent. ~ mw

  • mysticventures On Saturday, November 6, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    *claps hands* yes, very well done. As you can tell I love haiku :)

  • Storm On Tuesday, October 26, 2004, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    This form of poetry with structure makes writing (and reading) so much more interesting. Existenial questioning in its may be coolest form.. -S

  • Derelict Dream On Saturday, November 6, 2004, Derelict Dream (38)By person wrote:

    Thanks for commenting on this one, It seems to be my least liked work so far, but I will learn from it.....

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