Untitled

By Rebel_Angel

Anyone have a good title for this one?


You have a way with me,
I can’t be mad, even when I wanna be,
Your so thoughtful and kind,
But sometimes I don’t know your motives,
It’s like your confused,
As well as I.

Maybe we need to communicate more,
Tell each other what we want, and how we feel,
But what if we don’t know what we want or how we feel?
If we did, would that change anything?

You have been taken,
By a girl with a boyfriend,
My so called friend none the less.
How does that work?
Your best friends with the guy, but blinded by the girl.
She says she can’t help it, you flirting with her the way you do.
How do I convince you, you don’t need her.

How do I let you know how I want things to end up,
Especially when I have no clue.
All I know is how I feel when your around,
And that is wonderful.

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Copyright 2004 Rebel_Angel
Published on Thursday, September 9, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sky Singer On Monday, October 17, 2005, Sky Singer (153)By person wrote:

    wish i could help ya with the title, but that's something i struggle with myself. as for the poem, i rather enjoyed it, and i wish i could say that i can't relate....

  • Kinkypoptart On Thursday, April 21, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    I know what you're feeling as I have felt it too. Good write ~*~Tart~*~

  • mysticventures On Thursday, September 9, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    the first line says it all

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