Wall Beast

By scorpionstale

Why do you look at me like that?
You're hideous!
Wretched BEAST!

Can't you just go away?
Quit trying and do it right!
Lousy soul!

Why do you mock me?
Staring like that.
Find a new friend!

Leave me alone!
I can't stand your lies!
This is your ending.
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HA! Look at you now!
Broken, lying on the floor
Who's better now?
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You're still staring at me,
Damn I hate mirrors.

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Copyright 2004 scorpionstale
Published on Wednesday, August 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Rant"
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  • Vindicated_untouchable On Monday, August 30, 2004, Vindicated_untouchable (14)By person wrote:

    I share your hatred... We should start an army... ~Katie~

  • Anth On Wednesday, August 25, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    good poem,fast paced,but i feel you should take out or change the very last line to give it more weight

  • scorpionstale On Wednesday, August 25, 2004, scorpionstale (21)By person wrote:

    I wasn't sure how to end this peice, any reccomendations?

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