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Candles
By TheReap
My love stories are like candles
They always end the same
Some are longer some are shorter
The candle wins the game
The glow feels just like the fire
The fire in my heart
But the flame withers and dies out
I knew that from the start
When the wax it melts and drips down
Down to it's very base
It feels like I've lost the battle
Oh, How can I save face
Time has come for me my lover
To slowly fade away
And now in my darkest hour
The sorrow rules the day
There are many candles out there
And none that bear my name
A few candles burn forever
For me they end the same
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Copyright 2004 TheReap
Published on Wednesday, August 4, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Candles"
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A former member wrote:
Always so much sadness. Every time we start to feel safe, some sick force decides to pull the rug out from underneath us. Life can be so very futile.
I know this. I like this.
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On Monday, March 21, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(200)
wrote:
nice write i like....~saint~
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
beautiful! ~SW~
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On Sunday, September 12, 2004, stuart_pid
(135) wrote:
this poem is quite incredible and original. the comparison of love to a candle is an image that will stick in my head for a long time to come. very well written also.
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A former member wrote:
I like this. Very pretty and well written. I also know how it feels.. For they all end the say way for me as well.. Good write.
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On Thursday, August 19, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Welcome to DP, it's not a competition(though a select few act that way) each one of us is unique and our words just as much...
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A former member wrote:
to know the candle with burn out... the cruelest fate... sigh
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A former member wrote:
This is very well written.I love it.It is very true as well.
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On Thursday, August 5, 2004, TheReap
(38) wrote:
This and my other submissions were probably written 15+ years ago.
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