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forgive me father, for i have sinned
By lonelygurl
forgive me father, for i have sinned
here is my confession
i have loved someone so much
i put them before all else
forgive me father, for i have sinned
here is my confession
i have given my soul to the one i love
and given it completely
forgive me father, for i have sinned
here is my confession
i have made love until i screamed
and blashpamied his name
forgive me father, for i have sinned
here is my confession
i have lost all faith
in what i am supposed to believe
where do i go from here?
now that i have made my confession?
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Copyright 2004 lonelygurl
Published on Saturday, July 31, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, a_deception_unto_myself
(15)
wrote:
great write.but i also agree that there is no sin.If we werent mean to love then He wouldnt have given us the emotion in such breath taking amounts.
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On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, mysticventures
(538) wrote:
excellent write - and I see no sin!!!
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On Tuesday, August 17, 2004, TheReap
(38) wrote:
Well done
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On Monday, August 9, 2004, SilencedAngel
(52) wrote:
Very nice write.
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A former member wrote:
this was superb, the repetition of the first two lines was a great touch =)
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