to the one i love

By lonelygurl

you are the one i love
my heart is a puzzle i tried to keep apart
somehow you knew which pieces to fit
to make it whole and solved
i tried to hold back one finally piece
that too you found
i give you my heart body and mind
and i hope you take them
with all that i am

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Copyright 2004 lonelygurl
Published on Tuesday, July 13, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dei On Monday, October 8, 2012, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    I like the idea you created of the heart being a puzzle you would rather not have solved. I can relate to that sentiment.

  • A former member wrote: I truelly do like this pc, awesome job can't wait to read more.

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