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I Know How You Feel
By Vindicated_untouchable
A young babe cries
In her mother's arms
I know how you feel
An old man weeps
At his dead wife's feet
I know how you feel
The clouds pour down
Tears onto the ground
I know how you feel
I know how you feel
For many a days
Have I washed life away
Crying for another
An unforgotten lover
I know how you feel
Eyes are soaked
Fear is provoked
I know how you feel
Your life's gone wild
Beware the unborn child
I know how you feel
Death has kissed
The slits on you writs
I know how you feel
I know you feel numb
~ForgottenFlame~
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Copyright 2004 ForgottenFlame
Published on Thursday, July 8, 2004.
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Comments on "I Know How You Feel"
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A former member wrote:
nice and touching. I like "An old man weeps At his dead wife's feet"
I know how you feel.. it shows how even after time, age, and years of experience. pain will still exist
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On Friday, July 9, 2004, Anth
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wrote:
this is a great work,the repeating line and style and flow,calming almost, enjoyed this
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On Friday, July 9, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
So caring and sweet. You may know how it feels though but everything is different for other people. Great write. ~Kirsten~
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