Broken Angel

By morbiddemonchild

~This poem dosn't rhyme through the entire thing but it means something to me so I'm putting it on here.~




I've been waiting for too long
I think I've finally given up
You won't come around & tell me what's wrong
So I'll just walk away

You cut your arms
You hide all your pain
You shell it out to me &
I don't want it

Please don't watch me when I cry
I know you love me
But I don't know why
I don't want you

Don't hold me in your arms, tell me everything's okay
I remember what you did
The blood that ran
The way you didn't care

You say you'll change for me
I don't believe you
You don't want help
So there's nothing I can do

I can only try to forget
To give up on you
I want to leave
Yet I know you need me

Please give me a reason to believe
Every word you say
That you really want to change
Kiss me to show me

I feel like a prisoner of my own fate
I need to know what's going on
Before it becomes too late
Tell me...

Please...

I Love You

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Copyright 2004 morbiddemonchild
Published on Friday, May 28, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • SorrowSoul On Thursday, July 7, 2005, SorrowSoul (54)By person wrote:

    Nice work. Sadness and confusion drive people to write very good poems just like this one.

  • A former member wrote: It doesn't have to ryme in order to be a poem. Most poetry doesn't ryme! I know what you are talking about though. I'm going through the same damn thing.

  • K_Love On Friday, May 28, 2004, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    I like it a lot. I agree it doesn't need a rhyme at all. Beautifully said. Lovely words. ~Kirsten~

  • A former member wrote: oh...very, very, very goooooooood!!!!! So sad, words so shrilling, powerful.. Exelent work! Opera Ghost

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Friday, May 28, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    Doesn't need to rhyme, it was nice the way it is. Full of mixed emotion. I see why it means so much, well written, you got your point across ^_^ -roachy's wife

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