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A smile found
By rage_angel
For the first time
In a long time
I found the lost smile
I've been looking for
The sparkle begins in the eyes
The same one that used to tell lies
Now they crinkle with delight
And a laugh escapes
So many times
Tears came instead
For the pain I was fed
Is stll there, but not as close
To the surface anymore
The whole that you tore
No longer exsists
It's covered up
A life replaced the pain
A laugh erased the same
For the first time
In a long time
I found my smile
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Copyright 2004 rage_angel
Published on Saturday, May 1, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A smile found"
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On Sunday, May 2, 2004, rage_angel
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wrote:
Hey thanks you guys for the suggestion. I appreciate all the comments. Hopefully this work has more meaning now since the presentation is better
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A former member wrote:
I do like this, but like Doc and the dancing monkey, maybe you should loose the caps? I lost the feeling of the poem because of the cappy-ness.. ~luci
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A former member wrote:
reminds me of those days when you wake up and realize the sun is shining...when really it's been shinning for the past 8 months but you've been too depressedto see it.
good write.
*lauren*
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On Saturday, May 1, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
I agree with the doc here.. :O) nice capital letters.. amde me all hyper like..
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On Saturday, May 1, 2004, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
hrm. i like this, it's simple and straight to the point. Around here this write stands out like a muppet on a train track. The only little tid bit that i didnt like was the presentation, all the caps. But thats just one man's opinion. Nicely Done [D&A]
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