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Dawn
By Guttercat
& time no longer holds meaning for me
in this moment
I live eternally
precious love
of what hopes begat
in it’s arms
I sense apathy
hope & dreams stir me still
in their waste shall I fulfill
leave me be
do thy will
in pain & blood
do prophecies feel
kill kill kill
I’ve died again & now
I dream
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Copyright 2004 Guttercat
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On Friday, May 28, 2004, Blood of Winter
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wrote:
I like the flow of this piece, kind of just rolls off the conscience
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
short, sweet and yet so emotive... very very nice. talented write. shows u that few words can also tell u so much... wow..!
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On Tuesday, April 27, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
the fragment feeling of this is very effective; like a snapshot in sepia... and crimson... very nice. welcome to dp. :)
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