Observing

By shadowwv

Afloat in oblivion
Watching things pass
Waiting for completion
Observing what life does mass.
Awash in apathy
Watching from the fringe
Waiting for revelation
Observing the swing of fate’s fringe.
Afloat in the shadows
Watching friends grow
Waiting for completion
Observing the future forward go.
1 November 2001 shadowwv

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Copyright 2005 shadowwv
Published on Thursday, November 1, 2001.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • maggot death On Wednesday, January 13, 2010, maggot death (60)By person wrote:

    I agree. Short, sweet, and pretty good. Expression is key to poetry. Keep expressing yourself.

  • Wiccad On Wednesday, January 13, 2010, Wiccad (124)By person wrote:

    Totally short and sweet. I loved it. Thanx for your work.

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