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Heart
By no_independence
Its always so cold in here
deep inside myself
forever hiding in fear
my heart up on a shelf
This pain I can not feel
it eats me up inside
though it can't be real
for in my heart
no soul reside
There is no hope left
why do I keep breathing?
all my dreams fall to death
my heart an empty beating
I call to you to set me free
but you will never come
for how can you save me
when your heart is also numb.
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Copyright 2004 no_independence
Published on Tuesday, February 10, 2004.
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On Sunday, February 29, 2004, Alanarchy
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wrote:
"For in my heart, no soul resides" That line owns me. Great work.
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On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
I like that you take the good with the bad in your comments, that shows a true poet..oh yes my cot.. I like this I like things that show your feelings.
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On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, Drifter
(265) wrote:
I think loved hit it. I like the ideas and feelings the poem portrayed. Very cool sis.
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On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, LovedByAMiracle
(51) wrote:
i liked this a lot. you're writing skills are definitely very good but i think you could have been a little more descriptive, it would have added more meaning.
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On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, no_independence
(19) wrote:
Thanx! I'll work on that! ~no_i
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