***** nation
By red_haze
an army marches west,
betrothed to a forgotten god.
mighty beneath his open hand,
and divine beneath his banner.
hand pressed to breast and throat,
pride-less tears devouring black eyes.
and stands, a fearless legion,
as hell rises to greet a golden dawn.
on perch, and crying for slaughter,
like birds of prey, enemy stirs.
and a red host stands strong,
hearts hard to the comming war.
man bows to the howling wind,
a tempest set to precede a massacre.
as purehearted soldiers weep
for a five star nation falling.
painted skin wrapped in blood's own cause,
mirrored beneath an unsheathed sword,
as down the empire, lies like babylon,
felled at the dragons black feet.
now, an army marches home,
victory beneath true god's love.
as man, as woman, as child; defeated...
all wrought such sorrow, now washed away.
Comments on "***** nation"
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On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
You're a very talented writer... your use of alliteration and rhyme, among other things, are well beyond the comprehension of most of this site's writers. Ever consider publishing your work? I don't think you'd have much trouble.
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On Friday, February 27, 2004, red_haze
(52) wrote:
my head grows larger with your compliments. even my ego blushes. thanks so much. :)
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Fantastic....must read more.
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On Friday, February 27, 2004, red_haze
(52) wrote:
thank you so much.
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On Monday, February 2, 2004, frost bite
(43) wrote:
wow that was really a fun write, I really enjoy your style and skill. I see alot of potential in this style and poem. great write
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2004, red_haze
(52) wrote:
thank you. :)