Perfect In Every Way

By freaky

I was thinking about you today
Thinking of what I would if I didn't have you
Thinking of how happy I am around you
Thinking of how you make me smile
Even when I have a frown
Thinking of how much I long to be with you
With you in those strong arms of yours
I was thinking of how much I love you
Even if you aren't mine
Thinking of never wanting to let you go
Thinking of how I want those soft lips
Upon mine for ever more
I was thinking about you today
About how you are perfect in every way
Were you thinking about me too?
This I can only hope for?

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Copyright 2004 freaky
Published on Thursday, January 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • AAA On Monday, November 14, 2005, AAA (17)By person wrote:

    I think you were writing of loving a man, still yet the emotions you feel are the same less strong arms. Great write, wish I had written it.

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, January 29, 2004, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    aww, this was so sweet. I often wonder if the person I'm thinking about is thinking the same thoughts. 9 times out of 10, they are (I'm being optimistic today) :) Good stuff, hun. :::OLd

  • Drea On Thursday, January 29, 2004, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    steph...gggrr i love this.. it made me cry. this year is going to be better. i promise. i know i have seemed distant..but i'm here. i just love your work...*hugs* ~Drea~

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