(The Real World) Can't Hurt You Any More

By Kryzten

I love the way you stroke my hair,
I love the way you smile;
But most of all I love the way that you stay in denial.
I love it when you stare at me,
And tell me all those lies.
Of course I didn't know the truth,
Until I saw your darkened side.

You promise me things that will never happen,
And you tell me lies just so I won't cry.
Well, don't worry about my feelings,
Cause I'm stronger than you think.

Just next time be more careful,
About where you plae you feet.
I really want to kill you-
I'm not a place to tread!
Too bad this gun won't hurt you-
Because you're already dead.

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Copyright 2004 Kryzten
Published on Sunday, January 25, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Just Dave On Thursday, November 16, 2017, Just Dave (448)By person wrote:

    A little sweet. A little sour. Great ending and write. JD

  • avlar On Thursday, March 17, 2005, avlar (24)By person wrote:

    i like how u express your self

  • yslehc On Sunday, January 25, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    wow.. that went from peacefulness to evilness... nice job, i like it.

  • A former member wrote: I'm loving your use of rhyming, and those last two lines are brilliant. Nice write. ~Wish Upon A Star

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