If

By no_independence

If I were normal
for just one day
would you notice me
or just walk away

If I put on a smile
shown just for you
would you smile back
and would it be true

If I said how I feel
what would you do
would you laugh at me
or say you feel that way too.

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Copyright 2004 no_independence
Published on Saturday, January 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Moonflower On Tuesday, May 1, 2007, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    cute, almost sad

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Wednesday, February 11, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    I like that, it makes you think.

  • Tangent Ponderings On Sunday, January 25, 2004, Tangent Ponderings (13)By person wrote:

    very nice work ~Bob~

  • Drifter On Saturday, January 24, 2004, Drifter (265)By person wrote:

    Short and sweet. A very relatable topic as well. Nice work.

  • A former member wrote: good one i liked it _Nightlee_

  • yslehc On Saturday, January 24, 2004, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    i wonder that about certain people sometimes.. nice write.

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