Mind Rake

By MrGrieves

Welcome friend
to delinquent dream
disfunctional dance
with fucked up mate
and final chance
at lasting happiness
the holiest kind
mind your manners
don't cut in line
and mother says
take your time

It's not over

Just the usual drunken banter
between heaping spoonfuls
to torrent outpour
pocketed feelings, and
mind raking, followed by
"please god wake me"

Welcome indeed
do come in
dementia succeeds

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Copyright 2003 MrGrieves
Published on Wednesday, November 12, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • UnsilentMajority On Friday, November 21, 2003, UnsilentMajority (18)By person wrote:

    i agree this was creepy

  • A former member wrote: this is wicked crazy. it makes me think. love the dark, creepy'ness.

  • Jadednoir On Friday, November 14, 2003, Jadednoir (28)By person wrote:

    This is very thought provoking.. it reminds me of how fucking conditioned this world makes us. And how delusioned we can be... yes creepy indeed ~Jaded~

  • yslehc On Thursday, November 13, 2003, yslehc (334)By person wrote:

    aahh crazy.. it gave me a weird vibe there. i like the poem though hehe, kinda creepy

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