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Mind Rake
By MrGrieves
Welcome friend
to delinquent dream
disfunctional dance
with fucked up mate
and final chance
at lasting happiness
the holiest kind
mind your manners
don't cut in line
and mother says
take your time
It's not over
Just the usual drunken banter
between heaping spoonfuls
to torrent outpour
pocketed feelings, and
mind raking, followed by
"please god wake me"
Welcome indeed
do come in
dementia succeeds
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Copyright 2003 MrGrieves
Published on Wednesday, November 12, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Mind Rake"
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On Friday, November 21, 2003, UnsilentMajority
(19)
wrote:
i agree this was creepy
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A former member wrote:
this is wicked crazy. it makes me think. love the dark, creepy'ness.
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On Friday, November 14, 2003, Jadednoir
(28) wrote:
This is very thought provoking.. it reminds me of how fucking conditioned this world makes us. And how delusioned we can be... yes creepy indeed ~Jaded~
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On Thursday, November 13, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
aahh crazy.. it gave me a weird vibe there. i like the poem though hehe, kinda creepy
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