Another Face in the Hall
By Elf
This is talking about friends drifting apart. Some parts are weak I know,
but I hope that the overall poem is good.
walking down the corridor,
i notice you,
others could swear we were strangers,
you grant me no acknowledgement of my presence.
i don't want to be just another face in the hall,
i want things to be the way the way they were before,
we used to be so close,
we used to be best friends,
what happend?
i don't want to be just another face in the hall.
i try to say "hi,"
but you don't notice,
you brush past me in your hurry,
to get to your next class,
i smile and wave,
but you are distracted,
by a new friend's face,
that you just saw,
i don't want to be just another face in the hall,
i want things to be the way they were before,
we used to be so close,
we used to be best friends,
what happend?
i don't want to be just another face in the hall.
i say "hello,"
you are right next to me,
it's impossible for you to not notice,
you reply with a simple "hi,"
but your voice is distant,
your eyes cold,
and your manner distracted,
you turn a corner,
and we part.
i don't want to be just another face in the hall,
i want things to be the way they were before,
we used to be so close,
we used to be best friends,
what happend?
i don't want to be just another face in the hall.
Comments on "Another Face in the Hall"
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On Sunday, October 5, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
kathryn, darlin, you KNOW i cant be trusted to find things on my own. you have to TELL me whenever you post anything. its excellent, girl. you the bomb. okay, ghetto dead now. -B
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On Saturday, October 11, 2003, Elf
(47) wrote:
thanks
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On Wednesday, October 1, 2003, Loserland
(113) wrote:
simple but effective... the cold shoulder sucks ass..