Sad But Funny

By morbiddemonchild

i watched in amazement the days go by
when i thought i couldn't live without you in my life
now you are
all i feel is dead inside
i'm running in circles with no place to hide
today you left my side
and guess what?
i died




NOTE: this poem does not make me happy so it probably will not be on here much longer.

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Copyright 2003 morbiddemonchild
Published on Thursday, September 25, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mauler On Friday, September 26, 2003, Mauler (4)By person wrote:

    Quick and powerful is the way to go.

  • A former member wrote: I too have poems that bring back bad memories and make me unhappy so understand your footnote, however it would be a shame for it to have to be removed. I found it strong - the last line "i died" really making it work.

  • morbiddemonchild On Thursday, September 25, 2003, morbiddemonchild (33)By person wrote:

    i just am not happy with it because it took no effort on my part whatsoever. i just let the pen go. i guess if i can come out with something that good i should just keep letting the pen go, shouldn't i?

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