Anxiety Dream
By MrGrieves
The distance from me to sleep
the climb to dreams on skeleton trees
contingent on intake of drink
i love this silly state of mind
with bad intentions and catchy senquences
a sip to get there
a trip each night to no concept of time
then a turn
teeth fall from spongey black gums
they never gave a reason
my arrival was too late in my sedate
jonny's on time though
impecably in fact,in hand a weight
an anchor of sorts
tied to my feet and dragging me through this murky water
but i fret for my teeth
and worry so, what the fish will think
so stripped and exposed
not my choking lungs
nor lack of air
but what i cant see, but know is there
the looking-glasss self, reflects hatred of me
the ugliest affect
wake in cold sweaty sheets
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Copyright 2003 MrGrieves
Published on Tuesday, September 23, 2003.
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On Saturday, December 12, 2009, JingaBelle
(19) wrote:
If Salvador Dali wrote a poem it'd be just like this! Love it.
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A former member wrote:
wow....Nice write. ~cold~
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
mm. yeah, i want more... more writing, more slivers from your head. this is catchy, and catching.
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On Wednesday, September 24, 2003, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
Welcome. Nice write, the last line capped it beautifully. Like Raven, I look forward to more of your work.