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By WitheredRoses

Beaten down again,
My body's giving out.
You've pushed me to the edge again,
I can't handle this pain.

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Copyright 2015 WitheredRoses
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  • A former member wrote: ((HUGE HUGS)))

  • A former member wrote: Raw and very strong emotions nice displayed.

  • WitheredRoses On Thursday, December 24, 2015, WitheredRoses (16)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: This pain.... Is it physical or emotional, or a combination of both. I interpret it as both... As always a brief but emotion filled work. Don't give up keep writing :)

  • WitheredRoses On Thursday, December 24, 2015, WitheredRoses (16)By person wrote:

    It's both. This is really just me letting out some stuff I was feeling. I know it's rough and very short, but I figured I might as well post it. Thank you though :)

  • WitheredRoses On Thursday, December 24, 2015, WitheredRoses (16)By person wrote:

    All my work is a bit short. I think it's because I like to just honestly pour out what I'm feeling and don't feel the need drag it on.

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