D.T's Introduction
By Damon Tarloth
Notes/Tips:
Try reading this at 1.5x - 2x the normal speed, using your own judgment
to gauge when and where to do so, and I think my words will open up to
you in a whole new way...
I'm Darkness.. Silently watching,
When your talking, blah, blah, blahing,
Stalking, Hidden, Blending in, Like a chameleon...
Sadistically sorrowful, Glorified pain,
Uniquely psycho, Atypical sane...
Solid as smoke, through the sands of time.
Lonsdaleite dimensional, Suspicious perception,
Straight-edge sharp, Master of Deception...
Just as quick, Pop off crazy,
Black-Flag cocktail, Your vision's hazy.
Life stealer, 8 legged arachnid killer,
Leave more dead in my wake, than Jackson's Thriller!
Life of the party, Rationale abating,
Mental tragedy, Edge I'm skate'n,
Ruination allured, Drenched in Hate!
Visually fascinated, Poisonous fate...
Frozen in Time, Gray matter lash, Flash to the past,
Reality check! Wait... Never-mind.. It's far too late!
Honorary guest at a Cross-hair meeting,
Preachers in place, Gothic embrace.
Death Bringer, A Déja vu doom,
Aces up Dead-ringer, Click.. Click.. Boom!
D.T.
(Alternate 4th Stanza)
Poisonous quick, Pop off crazy,
Black-Flag cocktail, Napalm fogged hazy.
Life stealer, 8-legged arachnid killer,
Leave more dead in my wake, than Jackson's Thriller!
Author's Note:
The places we go when we fall into a slumber...Comments on "D.T's Introduction"
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A former member wrote:
The poem flowed perfectly. You kept the theme throughout the whole poem and didn't stray to keep your rhyme scheme. I likes this one better then version 1. Your ending is perfect.
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On Thursday, February 26, 2015, Damon Tarloth
(142) wrote:
I feel much better with the results of how this one turned out compared to the original version. I thought about removing the other version, but decided against it, as I need to not forget the road that I walked or the progression along the way... Thank you for reading and taking the time to comment on what you read... The input of others is a very important part of the improvement process to the author... Thank you! :)
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A former member wrote:
No problem. The transition is key. I would keep them both too.
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On Sunday, March 1, 2015, Damon Tarloth
(142) wrote:
I never want to forget where I came from, the path I have walked, and the lessons that should be learned or at the least not forgotten, so I don't make the same mistakes down the road...