The Open Eye

By Flying indigo express

If I could And you would
And I try But you won't
But even if you would And I could What's the point If I will And you won't And I cry But you don't
Even if you could And I would Why try? This again
Because .
.
. Maybe this doesn't get better
Maybe this is as good as it gets
The monkeys will always be monkeys
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and
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I
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was just wasting my breath

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Published on Sunday, December 28, 2014. Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Comments on "The Open Eye"

On Thursday, January 1, 2015, heinzlet (25) wrote:

Hey Flying, you're truly exceptional, I love your style... Congrats on your MVP title! you totally deserve it, cheerio! :) PS: Deep words here, I enjoyed the read.
On Thursday, January 1, 2015, Flying indigo express (148) wrote:

Thank you, I was not expecting that...at all. I appreciate the complement. I am trying to map out a swim in this "Ocean at the End of the Lane".
On Thursday, January 1, 2015, heinzlet (25) wrote:

I noticed, Neil Gaiman that is, a wonderful book, one of my favorites:) "Monsters come in all shapes and sizes"
On Monday, December 29, 2014, Crashoverride (10) wrote:

this is beautiful. live in the moment and dont open your mouth to try and explain it.
On Monday, December 29, 2014, Flying indigo express (148) wrote:

Thank you, sounds like sage advice to me!
A former member wrote: I like the flow. Truth well put.
On Monday, December 29, 2014, Flying indigo express (148) wrote:

Thank you very much, I appreciate the feedback.