Dancer
By Nightwing
The year was 1922. Outside, the air held a sharp chill, typical for Chicago
at this time of the year, but inside the nightclub it was warm, and the
music played softly in the background. Small, square, wooden tables dotted
the floor, and a thin veil of cigarette smoke drifted lazily over them.
The lighting was dim, adding to the charismatic atmosphere that was planned
out so carefully, one which drew a steady flow of regular guests. There
was a simplistic elegance in the decor, which did not distract from the
dancers, but rather created a dignified aura around them. There was a big
difference between the strippers in the bar three blocks down, and the
exotic dancers who performed here. This place had class, and the women
who danced erotically here commanded the audience's utmost respect.
This evening's show was over, but the club would remain host to most of
the guests for several hours more. One of the dancers was leaning on the
bar, laughing and chatting amid a circle of admirers. The owner wasn't
far away. Sitting casually on a stool, he sipped his drink, seemingly aloof,
but closely monitoring the crowd to assure no one got out of hand. They
never did though; it just wasn't that kind of place. She let her eyes drift
away from the scene at the bar as she stepped down to the seating area.
The amorous stares and soft-spoken invitations were met with a flashing
smile, but with a quick wave of her hand, she brushed them all away. Weaving
a path between tables, she continued her search, sorting through a sea
of friendly faces until the one she was looking for was found. He sat alone
at a table, as always, further off toward the side of the room where he
was closer to the source of the music. His head bobbed almost imperceptibly,
keeping time with the soft, jazzy notes. A drink rested lightly between
his fingers, and the liquid inside the glass swirled in accompaniment.
He came here mostly for the music; it was the one thing he truly loved.
And the atmosphere here was conducive to listening to the music uninterrupted
by the loud talking and raucous laughter so common in other clubs. The
soft scent of perfume floated toward him, and without turning his head
he knew he wouldn't be sitting alone much longer. He gave the slightest
nod in acknowledgement as the dancer sat across from him. She leaned over
the small table, chin resting in her hands, the corners of her mouth turned
up slightly in a sly, friendly smile. She was beautiful. Her long, auburn
hair fell in soft waves far past her shoulders. Two white flowers were
clipped in her hair just above her left ear, sweetly fragrant gardenias,
and the golden earrings that dangled demurely beneath them, teardrop shaped
with an embossed rose ornamenting the bottommost point, glittered in the
low light. She stared at him this way with her soft, hazel eyes, no words
spoken, yet communicating in their own special way. Whatever thoughts went
through his mind, he kept secreted away. She broke the silence first, speaking
in soft velvet tones that could not be overheard. His side of the conversation
consisted mostly of nods, half smiles, and monosyllabic replies. He never
expressed the pleasure he derived from her company, though he looked forward
to these moments with her. Perhaps that was part of the reason he came
here every evening, besides the music, of course. Her reasons for seeking
him out were really quite simple. She liked him; she liked his aloofness
toward her. No foolish banter, no lines of ploy used in hope of seduction.
Simple, pleasant conversation was all that they shared, and she enjoyed
that for exactly what it was.
The next hour flew by quickly, and was more time than she had intended
to spend. Her eyes glanced down at the creamy white petals she fingered.
She had absentmindedly pulled them from her hair when the clip holding
them in place worked its way loose. Dropping the fragrant blossoms, she
reached across the table to give his hand a quick squeeze. It was getting
late, and she knew she should go. She murmured a short goodbye as she rose
from her seat, and made her way back through the maze of tables to the
backstage area. She quickly gathered up her belongings, and threw on her
coat. Usually she would walk home with one of the other girls, but the
telltale emptiness of the room made it apparent that tonight she would
be walking home alone.
As she slipped out the back door, she was greeted by a blast of wind,
whose cold chill made her pull the coat tightly around herself. And as
she turned the collar up around her neck, the wind caught the door behind
her, slamming it shut with certain finality. It felt cold enough to be
winter, though it wasn't quite that time of year yet. Still, most of the
trees already lay bare in their branches. It would be winter soon enough.
She walked briskly to hasten her walk home, taking a shortcut through the
back alley that would save her about ten minutes time. She held her head
bowed slightly against the wind, hurrying along as much as the high-heeled
shoes would allow her.
Curse the wind, at least for this one night. If it hadn't been blowing
so strong as to make her lower her head, she might have seen. If it hadn't
been whistling so loudly, she might have heard. If it hadn't chilled her
so deeply, she might have walked the main streets home. But as it was,
she came to a startled, abrupt halt. There was some one standing in her
path, directly in front of her, a man. A few steps more and she would have
walked right into him. She raised her head up, and stepped back. He came
forward. Her eyes opened wide as his hand raised up from his side. He had
a knife. She took a few steps back in an effort to escape. She tried to
run. He grabbed at her with his free hand. The knife was held high for
a fleeting moment before it was plunged into her throat. She felt it rip
through as it was pulled down, twisted, then pulled down further. And she
felt herself falling. Fleeing footsteps echoed hollowly in her ears as
she lay on the ground, a river of her own blood flooding down around her.
Her eyes were open only a slit when she saw some one kneeling in front
of her, a policeman come too late. The last sight she saw on this earth
was the look of pained distress on his face, as he reached out, taking
her shoulders gently with shaking hands, trying to raise her up. Her head
fell back as the last flicker of life left her body, and he laid her back
down. Her head fell to the side in a lifeless movement, and her long, auburn
hair, now soaked with blood, fell away from her face, revealing a golden
earring that glittered in the moonlight, a drop of blood giving color to
the single rose that adorned it.
The music had stopped playing. Only a few guests still remained, most
of them already pulling on their winter coats in anticipation of the cold
weather outside. His glass had long been empty, and he gave it a final
push towards the middle of the table in dismissal. Like the other guests,
he rose from his seat to put on his coat. The club would be closing in
a few minutes, and, as usual, he would be among the last to leave. He glanced
down at the table for anything he might have left behind. Two white flowers
caught his eye, and he picked one up absentmindedly, turning it in his
fingers, savoring the softness of the petals and the exotic fragrance permeating
from it. He let it drop from his fingers, and it fell back to the table,
resting next to the other blossom that had carelessly been left behind.
He turned to leave, barely one step away from the table when he hesitated,
then turned back. He carefully picked up the two blossoms, and, smiling,
he gently deposited them in his pocket.
Awards
Comments on "Dancer"
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A former member wrote:
It feels like it flowed really nicely, i enjoyed it :]
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful flow. You had me sympathetic towards both characters- at the end, with the man and the flowers... So sad. Tragic, beautiful..wow.
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On Monday, January 3, 2005, ZealousValadiction
(42) wrote:
I opened my mouth and i could find no words expt sweetly mind rendering to leave you with
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A former member wrote:
forever thoughtful.
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, angelunderneath
(60) wrote:
Wow! This was really good! The detail in it left almost nothing to the imagination. Awesome!!