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Sense of Direction
By Geronimo
Following my own shadow towards the concept of living out loud,
Contemplating my next move as I crawl through the crowd,
Could someone please tell me,
Which way is down?
Following my own example toward heaven or hell,
Which way the sun sets I cannot tell,
Could someone please tell me,
Which way is out?
Following my existence of passive imperfection,
step by step, twist by twist, searching for human connection,
I have lost all sense of direction.
Could someone please tell me,
Which way is up?...
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Copyright 2014 Geronimo
Published on Thursday, July 3, 2014.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Sense of Direction"
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A former member wrote:
The image of following yourself in different directions without knowing exactly which way it is your going is a powerful one, and has connection to many's lives, as I have been through this myself
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On Sunday, July 6, 2014, vicimineo
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wrote:
You're following yourself throughout the poem but are still lost... Powerful image..I like the rhythm it's almost repetitive but not quite...Well done
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A former member wrote:
Wow, very nice. I like how it all flowed. Simple, yet complicated on its own level.
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On Wednesday, July 2, 2014, Geronimo
(10) wrote:
Thank you for the comment! New to this site; it feels like the place to be.
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