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Creatures From Hell Part 2 of ?
By Damon Tarloth
To gain a form it must completely feed,
Consume the host in every way,
It's essence, It's blood, It's hate, It's love,
Relive all their memories, Experience every pain,
This must be done for the form to be claimed...
They can instantly alter between any form,
Or age it from young to old,
They bleed like us but can not die,
Totally immune to Disease, Time, Heat, Cold,
Regenerate quicker than a blink of an eye...
Can take on a form and look completely dead,
Feign death is a trick they use to survive,
The best way to kill them is cut off their head,
But only that form dies and the rest stay alive...
Damon Tarloth
04/15/14
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Author's Note:
If you take the time to read this poem - Please leave a comment... Good or Bad... Anything Is Better Than No Comment At All...Comments on "Creatures From Hell Part 2 of ?"
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(250)
wrote:
Its an intriguing concept. I enjoy this take on a classic beast. Beautiful work
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2014, Damon Tarloth
(142) wrote:
Thank you very much :) I already wrote part 3 to this story, but I got no interest so I didn't post it...
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2014, SickSanityJenn
(250) wrote:
You need to post it. I would love to read it. There's plenty of times I write and nobody comments and sometimes when nobody reads. Don't let it discourage you or make you question your talent. You're good. Just gotta put it out there, don't let anything hold you back
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2014, Damon Tarloth
(142) wrote:
I posted it, but added it on to the post that has Part 1,2, and 3. I just read it again and I need to do a rewrite as I sat down and wrote it on the spot to get it done as I told someone else I would got write right then and I was not in the right mood to do it, but I did it anyway and it shows as it feels forced; well it was. Probably too much into detail and not enough left for the reader to have their own vision of what is going on. So it is posted, but just added on as I wasn't proud of how it turned out. This way I did what I said I would do without people reading the disaster and making a mental not to never read anything from me again, after seeing that... After the rewrite I will post it again as a new poem and not be ashamed of people reading my words; as I can do much better than what is currently part 3 of this story... Damon
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