Unification

By nkronsch

In this ocean
    I hear the soothing roar
        of the God I never believed in.
As the rain pours
     from the veins of the sky
        Streaking her mascara (for once not with tears)
--

I smile, and recieve hers
    for amidst the greys and oranges of a cloudy sunset
                    the abalone's white stands clear
She leans down
    Whispering silk into my ear
        through her cracked lips
            Gazing hope into my eyes
                From green to blue...
                    From naive to wise.
As the water shimmers
    with the dying beams of a setting sun
            these two average souls
                become, at last, a magnificent one.

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Copyright 2014 nkronsch
Published on Sunday, March 30, 2014.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I gave it my best shot. Nothing could truly describe the serenity and overwhelming love at that moment.
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  • Nimue44 On Thursday, February 19, 2015, Nimue44 (296)By person wrote:

    Savage, wild, rainy love, and as always a beautiful pace that creates images vivid and quivering. I think I'm gonna be your fan.

  • A former member wrote: Gorgeous write...Beautiful and thanks for the comment and friendship.

  • A former member wrote: wow...so romantic and enthralling... gives a heady feeling of being dizzy, ecstatic, high, much like love itself. grippingly gorgeous piece, mr. sporkinburger. a real gem.

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