God bless the broken

By Allen

God bless the broken,
those who are soft spoken,
for they are choking.
They are the chosen,
frozen with fear,
cant bare to hear the satanic wisper they all hear.
Their minds are destroyed by what they want most,
what eludes even the most patient.
Happiness is what they want,
for it they would do anything.
These true may be few,
but they are special,
may god bless each and everyone of them,
for they know the world as it is not as many want you to think.
Live a hard life of much pain and strife,
but that life is priceless.
You who know may god bless you for you will live a hard life,
but remember their is a light at the end of the tunnel.

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Copyright 2014 Allen
Published on Thursday, February 20, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

dont know how good this actualy sounds. and if you dont belive in a god well im not to tight with him. also this was inspired by "this is for the broken" wrote by a member on here
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  • A former member wrote: very interesting and powerful, really strikes a nerve. thank u.great write. -thor

  • A former member wrote: No matter who you choose to believe in, take peace and comfort from your prayers, for our's is the kingdom, the power, and the glory. Yes, my dear. Bless the broken paths that we travel. Reb:).

  • A former member wrote: I love this poem, it means a lot. But the light at the end of the tunnel may not be the light we want. Not just metaphorically, but literally.

  • megaprime81 On Thursday, February 20, 2014, megaprime81 (743)By person wrote:

    I don't know about anybody else, but i think this is awesome and inspiring, as well as being different. 10

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