Just one night

By Katarina

Let me drown in your love if for just one night
For when daylight comes you will take flight

Back to my life of missing you
 My life's nothing without you 

Days are long and nights are too
Sitting here alone missing you

IM greatful to have you in my life
Even if for just one night

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Copyright 2014 Katarina
Published on Tuesday, February 4, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: good sense of rhyme and flow, much potential here!

  • megaprime81 On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Short n' sweet . Very nice read. 10

  • poe_lover28 On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    oh and I think you meant to put Night on the title, dont worry I constantly have typos in my poems the first time, I've learned to double triple amd quadruple check lol

  • Katarina On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, Katarina (7)By person wrote:

    Woops. I'm glad your here to notice these things. Thank you so much for all your comments. I hope you continue to enjoy my work.

  • poe_lover28 On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, poe_lover28 (163)By person wrote:

    though I cannot relate to the fleeing in the morn, I can veey much relate to being appreciative of even only a night, for every moment I can be his. because sometimes they can only give so much. but if they have no more than a night, cherish and be grateful they are there at all.. seems youve grasped tbat well though and don't need to hear it, lovely poem miss Katarina, you are quite a roll of poems it seems.

  • Katarina On Tuesday, February 4, 2014, Katarina (7)By person wrote:

    I haven't been writing long but they seem to come easily at times. We have all had heart break and pain. Im Just finally releasing it for all to read. Don't worry I'm not as messed up as I might seem lol

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