Creatures From Hell Part 1, 2, & 3

By Damon Tarloth

The Unholy ritual magically bound,
To celebrate something that should not be,
Created something from beyond,
That lives for an eternity...

Blood is a nectar as sweet as wine,
But not needed to sustain,
No effects from the passing of time,
The cost of a ritual to remain...

Animal ferocity with a hawks sight,
They move like the wind across the land,
Read the thoughts of man and beast alike,
Created eons ago on the Night of the Damned...

Born of magic and nothing more,
Changing their shape to blend in well,
These creatures of darkness are magical horrors,
Spawned from the deepest pits of Hell...

They resemble humans in almost every way,
They have our emotions, Our needs,
The pain of Love and Hate,
Ambitious, With a lust to breed...

13 forms is all that these can ever take,
If one is lost it can never be reclaimed,
Some take human, Others take beast,
The ancient ones can take 13 of each...

Damon Tarloth

CREATURES FROM HELL PART 2

To gain a form it must completely feed,
Consume the host in every way,
It's essence, It's blood, It's hate, It's love,
Relive all their memories, Experience every pain,
This must be done for the form to be claimed...

They can instantly alter between any form,
Or age it from young to old,
They bleed like us but can not die,
Totally immune to Disease, Time, Heat, Cold,
Regenerate quicker than a blink of an eye...

Can take on a form and look completely dead,
Feign death is a trick they use to survive,
The best way to kill them is cut off their head,
But only that form dies and the rest stay alive...

Damon Tarloth

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CREATURES FROM HELL PART 3

Several ways that they remain alive,
Every 13 years one of these must be done,
Or one of their forms will cease to survive,
Losing part of themselves from within...

Blood of a hundred totally drained,
Easy for most, but hard for a few,
Some feel guilt from the forms they attained,
Dreading the deed that they must do...

Sacrifice what you love and covet,
Ritual of Life or Dance of the Dead,
All humanity may be what you forfeit,
Or fall into an endless slumber instead...

The next is the hardest to be done,
Sex, and utter destruction of a holy one,
You can't tempt, take, or mentally break,
Their god by choice they must forsake...

D.T.

FEEDBACK WANTED: I am trying to get better at writing. If it's bad I would rather have you say it's bad instead of saying nothing to prevent from hurting my feelings. If it's bad I need to know. Thanks...

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Published on Tuesday, August 12, 2014. Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

My Best 3 Poems are PURELY TAINTED / THERE IS NOTHING MORE THAN THERE WAS BEFORE / SEDUCTIVE PAIN

Comments on "Creatures From Hell Part 1, 2, & 3"

On Tuesday, August 5, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250) wrote:

I like this a lot, interesting and dark. Good ink
On Tuesday, August 5, 2014, Damon Tarloth (142) wrote:

Thank you for reading and leaving a response. I had part 2 up for a couple of months and you are the only person who cared to leave a response LOL... That tells me it sucks. Not because you responded, lol but because it took over 2 months to get anyone to read it and respond... :)
A former member wrote: That's an excellent work! You bestow life to the creatures of hell with your words and imagery :)
On Wednesday, June 25, 2014, Damon Tarloth (142) wrote:

Thank you very much...
A former member wrote: Wow! That was wonderful! You use the most perfect words in all the right ways, making vampires sound so human. I just love the clever rhymes, too. I really do hope you make another one! I bet the next one will be just as perfect and wicked as this one. Good luck! =D
On Tuesday, April 15, 2014, Damon Tarloth (142) wrote:

I just wrote a short part 2 to this one a few minutes ago... Thanks for commenting :)
A former member wrote: Continue to write part 2 tonight. you have started something now that you cannot stop even if you wanted to. The decision has been made, not by you, but continue to write, this may begin this night, because they have already begun to fight. Even if you don't write, it has started, and cannot be stopped, may the Gods have mercy on you, for speaking the truth out loud. It's to late anyway, the Trump has sounded, And The War has started on a different plain, and ends on this plain, this is not a game, although you not really to blame. The War has Begun, now would be the time to have some fun. RUN !!!
On Thursday, January 16, 2014, Damon Tarloth (142) wrote:

You have such inspiring words :) I wrote part 2 as you suggested. I can't post it yet, as if people read it without reading this one, it won't make much sense. I think I am posting way too much for people to even read or want to read for that matter...
A former member wrote: Don't wait for positive feedback. Write them. Interesting, this. Reads like an olden tale. They say anything we create with thought is mirrored on another plane. If so, somewhere these beings exist. Fascinating.
On Thursday, January 16, 2014, Damon Tarloth (142) wrote:

I feel sorry for the other plane that now have these in it. As further parts will have why they are, what they are, what they want, how they could or could not shape that world into a place of horror or harmony or total extinction.