Don't Give In
By Lil Demon Lady
Trash the noose,
Break the blade,
Throw the pills away,
Give yourself a few more days,
I know its bad,
I know you're sad,
But I promise you,
You'll soon be glad,
Death is forever,
Suffering is not,
Though it might feel like that a lot,
There is joy,
There is love,
I'm here if you need a hug,
I've been there before,
I seen what's behind those doors,
I know the horrors in those eyes,
But soon there'll be clearer skies,
Just hold on,
Don't give in,
To that temptation,
To the sin,
Life is worth it,
And I'll help you see,
Just how beautiful,
This world can be.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
Copyright 2013 Lil Demon Lady
Published on Monday, September 4, 2017.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Don't Give In"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Saturday, December 28, 2013, A soulless dark angel
(35) wrote:
This was so...personal and connecting. I loved this.
-
On Saturday, December 28, 2013, Lil Demon Lady
(39) wrote:
I'm glad ♥
-
A former member wrote:
this is well done, and carries a strong message! bravo!
-
On Friday, December 27, 2013, Lil Demon Lady
(39) wrote:
Danke! ♥
-
A former member wrote:
I like the first person perspective. Talking to a suffering soul in confidence. Only a survivor can bring a person back from the edge because they've "been there before". Well done.
-
On Friday, December 27, 2013, Lil Demon Lady
(39) wrote:
Thank you very much. Yeah, I thought that was the best approach for it, considering I wrote it for someone ♥
-
On Friday, December 27, 2013, SilentHeart
(7) wrote:
This is beautiful. I don't know a lot about poetry, but I loved this!
-
On Friday, December 27, 2013, Lil Demon Lady
(39) wrote:
Thank you ^_^