Start my life..
By gearhead
Should i just take a chance, go out and have some fun
And live my life before its all gone
Enjoy the moments that will stay with me forever
Or endour the pain of lifes endevour
Should i ask the question
Will you stay with me forever
Or shair my life with whoever
Should i take every chance to live the dream
Or Live life to the fullest with her next to me
Or treat ever moment like its my last
And keep living life in the past.,.,..
Should i take that chance, ask her to dance
Get out on the Floor and start some romance
I feel the passion growing inside
Buiding and building this i cannot hide
So ill take this chance and start to stride
Strole up to her and swallow my pride
And ill ask that question
Then ill start my life.....
Comments on "Start my life.."
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A former member wrote:
i love the depiction in this poem; the way the pen overshadows the idea of life's joys and pleasures in "freedom". then the way the broad road transforms into a narrow path, which in its own is all the more promising.
a very good write. Well done poet!!
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On Monday, December 9, 2013, gearhead
(19) wrote:
thank you, i always enjoy reading comments where someone likes my writing