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Life I've Made
By gearhead
This life i have made is wasting away
Little by little, i seem to fade
Into the dark, im all alone
No where to turn, no where like home
An erie fate, all my own
Mistakes where made, I've set the tone
Now i live, in what seems like a dream
Day by day, life starts to sting
Thoughts of the past, just bring me pain
Feeling alone all over again
With no one here, i have no peace
Writing these words
I have my release
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Copyright 2013 gearhead
Published on Friday, July 19, 2013.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, August 29, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
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wrote:
We all make choices and then we have regrets but with time everything fades... you think back about all the good that has came from these things... and it is then that you know you have done everything you could to make it a little better for you and for everyone else. Much enjoyed.
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A former member wrote:
I like the way you space your lines its a lot easier for me to read also I like that your lines are not long I am a fan of line breaks the only thing I would change is I think you mispelled fate other than that good job I enjoyed the read
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A former member wrote:
Memories fade, in the end everyone is forgotten, no matter what it is they accomplish. Just have to make the best of a good situation. I really liked this, well written.
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