crimson tears part 2

By Hells Angel

soul sits in darkness
blade against the skin
no one understands 
that i'm dead deep within

heart left alone 
coverded in cobwebs
and cuts deeper than skin

crimson tears run down my arm
it makes me feel so warm 
even in a snow storm

look into my eyes
i'll tell you what 
i'm caught in all these lies
even for all i do for you

i feel my soul is dying
my days are numbered to just a few

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Copyright 2013 Hells Angel
Published on Sunday, May 19, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

its short and seems unfinished to me. i might add to it some other time
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  • A former member wrote: Horribly cliche. If you're going to write something on an already tuckered out topic, at least make it interesting.

  • A former member wrote: People self harm for so many different reasons I won't bother saying I know what you're going through, because I'm certain that I don't, all I can say is that this work paints a very sad yet almost tangible picture.

  • Hells Angel On Friday, July 5, 2013, Hells Angel (11)By person wrote:

    I hope thats a good thing

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