winter-Time
By tallygrowsome
—because they say that his hands were full of snow armies
that fisted and broke; shattered limbs across invisible lines.
the paintings from half-remembered kisses were all a pig
-mented mess.
The slated shine of a home town vibrating in someone else's name
that fell down and melted down in the depths of his chest
while her bones fell away like stardust to reveal an eternity;
of sight over feeling.
—and at the end of the ranks of paper - thin creatures
one could see the truth in smiling; how it all tore the same
And he was their dust of the dirt and golden mire
until blocks of life caved,
and the temple fell.
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Copyright 2013 tallygrowsome
Published on Friday, May 3, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
at his best.Awards
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On Saturday, October 31, 2015, rwb35
(64) wrote:
surreal, I've read it multiple times now, love the feel of it
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A former member wrote:
Hmmm? It's a tale I do not know but I love it being told all the same.
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A former member wrote:
Is this about a picture you are looking at? A painting? Hmm...I return again to conjure its meaning. Perhaps I won't know, but the pleasure of reading remains the same.
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On Friday, May 3, 2013, Markus Darkscribe
(60) wrote:
I agree, very unique and thought provoking . Welcome to D P.
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A former member wrote:
How totally unique! I like your prose~style writing which holds to a poem quite well. This is something I'll have to read and read again, to absorb its meaning; parts which seem not to be of the whole and yet the entire feel is complete. I love the imagery, such original ideas in each line, and the ending is an excellent slow fade.