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Crimson tears
By Hells Angel
I just want to end it all
I can't take it anymore
The
crimson tears
run down my arm
and hit the ground
i
want to yell for help
but don't make a sound
i hurt on
the inside
so i hurt myself on the outside
everyone stares
but they
don't understand
i'm dying
i'm chained
to this sorrow
i can't break free
i look like i'm happy
but i'm dying inside
the blade is my friend
my only comanion
even though i'm living
i feel like i'm dying
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Copyright 2013 Hells Angel
Published on Thursday, April 18, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Crimson tears"
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A former member wrote:
I loved this, I´m a cutter as well and know what sorrow feels like. I have scars. Even though it might be hard, your scars will heal and you will be able to share your scars. I believe so. If you feel dead, you need to eliminate the problem, so you can feel alive again.
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On Wednesday, June 5, 2013, blue angel
(877)
wrote:
Sad, I'm left feeling deep sorrow. Nice flow, and well written* peace be with you . ~^_^~
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A former member wrote:
Asking for help is incredibly difficult, even impossible for some people, so different tactics need to be used to cope, whatever those may be. If you tell yourself you can't lose, you won't lose, you have already won, then you can never fail no matter the outcome because the truth is that because of your effort and will power you did in fact succeed, if you tell yourself you can't break free, or that you can't change, then you have already lost, because you defeated yourself. I hope that doesn't happen, your work is really good, and I think you will only get better.
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