Hypnotized

By bloodwolf

Her eyes draw me deeper into hypnosis

She calms the rage and psychosis
 
The soul is gone, but black hearts remain
 
If you really knew what I thought of rain
 
I left the baggage, burnt the bridge
 
And now I'm staring at the ridge

Her smile grips me into happiness

Sorrow is gone, so is madness

I love her so, she is my angel

She pulled me out of my prision of hell

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Copyright 2012 bloodwolf
Published on Sunday, December 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • FadedBlues On Sunday, December 30, 2012, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    ...nicely developed love poem, untraditional. good reading...

  • A former member wrote: Lovely work about love. I usually don't like love poems, they anger me, but I enjoyed this. Cheers.

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