Pneumatic Trance

Pulse, the beat, the intangible iron heartwork

Metallic substance, relinquish human intent

Hidden door way into our caustic clock work

Revealing secrets that God had laid to waste

We are all victims of subliminal conjugation

The dancing whore things, programmed pneumatic trance

Master technician of true unholy creation

Production standards have grown to blinding speed

The furnace churning

Belching ash from robotic afterbirth

Inhale the substance

Lungs accepting mal-intent

Breathe!!!

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Published on Sunday, April 22, 2012. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Pneumatic Trance"

On Saturday, April 28, 2012, Dominic (54) wrote:

Awesome. I'm envious of how you say so much in so few words. Really intense layers peeling back - like being punched in the face by the words.
On Saturday, April 28, 2012, WarTorn (40) wrote:

appreciate the compliment dominic...some of your work is quite impressive as well.
On Sunday, April 22, 2012, FadedBlues (2168) wrote:

...frightening visions of technology's anti-religion, like scenes from Fritz Lang's 'Metropolis'...
On Monday, April 23, 2012, WarTorn (40) wrote:

thanks for the feedback, definitely going to check out that piece of work.
On Sunday, April 22, 2012, RubyXero (484) wrote:

that was a lot going on in a small piece.. intense write I enjoyed it
On Sunday, April 22, 2012, WarTorn (40) wrote:

Thanks Ruby! I really enjoy creating an emotion with as little text as possible, kinda like a super concentrated substance.
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