Things I Want to Say

By Woes of a Succubus

You understand...unspoken,

Two hearts...so broken.

Seeing life now in another light.

Feeling like I'm coming awake,

Like all that I've known beginning to shake.

You've captured my heart, mind, and soul,

While life seems to spin out of control.

You're the hand I'll hold,

When this world is cold.

And walk together,

Through the land of the dead,

Through stormy weather,

And tears we shed.

All my dreams,

Lie behind your eyes,

The future now seems,

Bright starry skies,

Knew your name so long ago...

I've loved thee through the ages.

Past lives we used to know,

Written on ancient pages.

I loved you then in ages past,

And for all time our love will outlast.

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Copyright 2011 Woes of a Succubus
Published on Wednesday, September 14, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: this was so deep .. and agree with whisperingwalls sometimes love poems get cliche, but in my opinion you've made a whole new category! beautiful piece .. beautiful piece indeed.

  • whisperingwalls On Wednesday, September 14, 2011, whisperingwalls (210)By person wrote:

    Definetly felt the feelings of love and intamacy through the words, which is hard to do because love-related poetry can get really cliche. This is one of the few that I like, nice piece!

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