An Everlasting Moment

By HadassahDare

 And the power of your words
swung my heart
An empty space of time
filled with voidless kisses
And you brought me down
farther than ever before
An endless sigh of discontent
filled the bitter air
And your gaze shattered
everything I'd known of caring
And the effortless touch of your hand
pushed me closer than before
And I felt the war might be over
but one can never be sure
An everlasting moment
hung in the air
And I knew I could forgive you.
(originally written Jan.20th, 2003)

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Copyright 2011 HadassahDare
Published on Tuesday, September 6, 2011.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Beautiful. I'm listening to Dreaming Light by Anathema while reading this. It was incredibly perfect.

  • HadassahDare On Tuesday, September 6, 2011, HadassahDare (21)By person wrote:

    Why, thank you muchly. I never know how my depressed love poems will be taken.

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