3525: 5

By Virgils Vigil

It's dangerous
That's the idea
I'm a run away bullet-train,
outta control

What are you doing?

Play nice now
Why don't you put on some cloths?
Do you find this
difficult to understand?

Jimi Hendrix

One more time
A duel of honor
It's all for you
Like a scared rabbit

It's blue, repeat, blue

So easy,
Who's the girl he hasn't seen in so long?
BlueBlueBlueBlue
One more and I win

I get three time outs, you know

Masamune Liquor
Such a big rumor
You're really the commander
I was watching

I saw you

Not always always
Attacking the great lord of fear
The water, I'm in a river
Never heard of gravity,

You can't be real

Why are you pulling me so hard?
I know you do
That can't be good
Such a drama Queen

A million years underevolved

Useless
Chance
I'm the hitman
1961 model

Ouch.

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Copyright 2011 Virgils Vigil
Published on Tuesday, May 24, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

An experiment; part II
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  • Blood Saga On Wednesday, May 25, 2011, Blood Saga (78)By person wrote:

    This was quite a ride. It had me captivated the whole time, anticipating what would come next.

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