Admiration

By Virgils Vigil

Saliva slowly falls,
As the smoke quickly rises.
The heart slowly beats,
As the mind memorizes.
The night slowly shifts,
As lungs quickly tire.
There's little left in this world
to admire.

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Copyright 2011 Virgils Vigil
Published on Wednesday, May 11, 2011.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"
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  • Sudos On Wednesday, May 25, 2011, Sudos (147)By person wrote:

    Realizing the world for what it is... understanding people for what they are and comprehending the universe and your own grand scheme within it... this is what i felt from reading this.

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