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Gravity
By maliceman
I just want you to know
I gave you my heart,
But you let it go
Now its falling
falling
falling apart.
I reached out for your hand
But you slapped mine
away.
Tried to take a stand
But I've been falling
falling
falling for days.
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Copyright 2011 maliceman
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On Saturday, October 12, 2013, megaprime81
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Great poem, loved the structure as well as the message. A perfect work of art.
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A former member wrote:
Very effective poem. Love the structure.
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On Friday, February 18, 2011, 10 Forty Three
(593) wrote:
Awesome. Awesome. Awesome.
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On Thursday, February 17, 2011, Perkele
(26) wrote:
And screaming the whole way down. Good read!!!
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