Gravity

By maliceman

I just want you to know
I gave you my heart,
But you let it go
Now its falling
                          falling
                                      falling apart.
I reached out for your hand
But you slapped mine away.
Tried to take a stand
But I've been falling
                                    falling
                                                 falling for days.

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Copyright 2011 maliceman
Published on Thursday, February 17, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • megaprime81 On Saturday, October 12, 2013, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Great poem, loved the structure as well as the message. A perfect work of art.

  • A former member wrote: Very effective poem. Love the structure.

  • 10 Forty Three On Friday, February 18, 2011, 10 Forty Three (543)By person wrote:

    Awesome. Awesome. Awesome.

  • Perkele On Thursday, February 17, 2011, Perkele (26)By person wrote:

    And screaming the whole way down. Good read!!!

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