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reveal yourself
By sircumalot
love is stronger than sex
you are stronger with
me
im stronger with you
forever
make
my head state of art
thoughts state of criminal
body
state of, state of the one. me, it should be me
this cant. stay
on. longer. better...
i see necks everyday but never yours
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Copyright 2010 sircumalot
Published on Monday, November 22, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
i've read this several times now and although i feel it would benefit from more punctuation, a certain sense of longing does shine through. give me more pie man.
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On Friday, December 10, 2010, man of decay
(59)
wrote:
interesting
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A former member wrote:
a confusing read...confusing in the sense that..no worthy comment comes to mind.confusion now takes shape of enjoyment
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2010, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Nice. Wellcome to dp. Please till me if this was a whisper. cous it felt like it would make my neck hair stand if read aloud.
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