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Love
By SeventhCircle
Another beautiful night
On the town
Why do you smile that way?
Love's not a game to you
Blindness ensues
Circles are traced
Everything was wonderful
Love isn't pain
Ecstasy isn't physical
It can't be nothing
Compares to the feeling in my chest
Love broke the boundaries
The stars shine
Your face reflects
Them in your glory
Love makes me
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Copyright 2003 SeventhCircle
Published on Friday, June 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, Demosthenes
(155)
wrote:
heywhoa. im commenting. and you dont even know. cause youre not around anymore. but thats actually god. scary. -B
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On Friday, June 13, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Maybe not sad, but certainly quiet, and written with an understated quality of grace. Beautiful. ~ mw
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On Friday, June 13, 2003, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
Truthfuly and feltfuly expressed .. Yup, nice good write. [D&A]>
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A former member wrote:
How sweet."Ecstasy isn't physical, It can't be nothing Compares to the feeling in my chest Love broke the boundaries" Amazing, finally a guy not driven by sex lol
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On Friday, June 13, 2003, SeventhCircle
(22) wrote:
i originally intended for this to be sad, but i didn't have the heart for it. this one goes out to eileen. -Justin
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A former member wrote:
this was very smooth, and refreshing... nice write
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