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Agony
By DoomKitty
It started as a pressure- then a slice
The soft, spidery 'shhh' of
the knife cutting through flesh.
I thought I was numb-no, WAIT! I
can FEEL that!
My mind is screaming, but all my mouth can muster is
a faint whimper.
I look into the light, painful and bright
'It
hurts, it hurts," I mumble through tears.
I feel an unfamiliar rush-is
it adrenaline?
It drags me down, trying to drown me-
I surface-it
drags me again.
I hear a startled, gurgling cry
And slip under
one-last-time...
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Copyright 2010 DoomKitty
Published on Saturday, October 2, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Agony"
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A former member wrote:
A wonderful write. To me; its kind of visual.
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On Saturday, October 2, 2010, johnbevan17
(52)
wrote:
excellent write: the pains of hospital blunders as they try to put you under. :) great
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On Saturday, October 2, 2010, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
felt......
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