19-09-2010 Kill Kiss
By nur hidayah
She tastes like skin freshly grazed raw by teeth, only slightly
moist with a delicate rake of dryness.
She doesn't wet
them because she likes to keep you wanting more.
In an
intimate situation, she cannot help but be intense. Tempestuous. So,
your teeth gnash against hers just once.
If there's tongue,
hers would barely pass the lips. She doesn't like to initiate.
She has to find out first, if you have the gall to think you
are deserving of her. But when you slip in bravely, she approves and
subtly responds.
Very carefully, by installment.
Yet the one thing that makes everything catch fire is not the dance
of her mouth, but the scent of her hair and the way her eyes wouldn't
stay close.
She watches in between flutters even as her hands
make sure that it is only her who has any control.
When
she finally pulls away---of course she'll be the one pulling away---you
will gasp at the stain of your soul on her lips, and you will feel
as if you are a lesser person than when she first decided to touch
you.
And until she deigns to give you her heart, the call
of your soul on those lips will tug and pull every fibre of your being
until you are once again breathless against her mouth.
Holding
your eyes fast with a coy smile, you will shiver in ecstasy and dread
as she says, 'hey... hey sweet. do you know the soul is endless?''
Author's Note:
Alternate title: What I imagine kissing Tiara would be like/ Hey, I can dream, can't I?Comments on "19-09-2010 Kill Kiss"
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A former member wrote:
This is the most capturing read I've had in aeons.
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A former member wrote:
"Yet the one thing that makes everything catch fire is not the dance of her mouth, but the scent of her hair and the way her eyes wouldn't stay close." A bit different than your other works. I like exploring the different facets of you. Your poetry always makes strange and gloomy music with my heart stings. This is pretty. Tiara must be some girl.
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A former member wrote:
Reminds me a lot of a song by Miss Li called "Don't Try To Fool Me".
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On Wednesday, September 22, 2010, nur hidayah
(114) wrote:
June, that song's spot on. Thank you. And Tiara's... Well. Tiara's Tiara. I've yet to find any worthy words for her.