Plagiarized Pain
By charliebrown
Black inked words in tormented rhyme,
Voiced over remnants, a squence
of lines.
Horrid beasts and bona fide fears,
A sequel to a life
of ten thousand years.
Mocking the pain with a despondent blade,
Your scars, skin deep, all custom-made.
Complex phrases, erected
and poised,
Your empathetic critics flail at your noise.
Yelling at God with animated screams,
Frantically running through
a hailstrom of dreams.
An architect of expression, percariously gory,
Your alliance of narratives; such a glum story.
For one thousand
cycles of Saturn, plus ten,
Enwreathing red fires, my four walls
ascend,
For I am the ink from your falsely held quill,
The essence
of darkness in those dreams so surreal,
The stench from your pustules,
vented for pleasure,
And that echoic pain, by which all pain is
measured,
That critic, I am, you find in your bed,
Slumber
aft slumber, deep in your head,
The anguish you seek but never can feel,
You plagiarize pain, I make it real.
Author's Note:
plagiarism is a nasty wordComments on "Plagiarized Pain"
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A former member wrote:
very nicely structured,
rhyme scheme is nearly perfect