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Broken
By SeventhCircle
Something went wrong
But my soul was blind
And the sour note was hidden by the symphony
There can't be a God
I can understand death
But life can be a curse too
Was it him?
Tears cannot hide my anger
And rage will twist away all pretense
I smile
I cry
She laughs
She cries
He took it away
He had no right
Why can't it be right again?
Life is truly a curse
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Copyright 2003 SeventhCircle
Published on Wednesday, May 28, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
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wrote:
I like how this piece kind of jumps around but keeps the same feel and idea the entire way through. It's almost song-like.
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, SeventhCircle
(22) wrote:
oook... for all of you out there who know me, this was a situation that was hypothetical and inspired by a dream, so don't get any ideas...
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